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My vacation was very funny because I did a lot of things that I like to do. For example I cleaned up and fixed my rc cars which were very dirty because I had a race last year, and my dad bought a new one for him. (para el? si es para ti es for me)

I played guitar, I learned 3 songs: Black magic woman by Santana, Messsage in a votle by The Police and The more difficult which I writed on the computer,

I had tennis classes, two hours of training. I love tennis because I sleep better and I have more energy for the next day.

my vacation was very fun because i did a lot of things that i like to do. For example i cleaned up, and fixed my rc cars. I had a race last year so they were very dirty. My dad bought a new one for himself.

i played a lot of guitar, i learned 3 songs: Black magic woman by santana, message in a bottle by the police, and the more difficult as one that i wrote on the computer,

i was in tennis class, two hour of training. I love tennis because i sleep better and i have more energy for the next day.

My vacation was fun because i did a lot of things that I like to do. For example i cleaned my rc cars, I had a race last year so wete vety dirty, too fixed in them, and my dad bought a new one for him.

I platyed to the guitar, I learned songs 3: Black magic woman santana, in a message votle by police and the most difficult, because in writing on the computer,

Tehnnis I was in classes, two hours of training. I love tennis because ii sleep better and have more energy for the next day.

ps ya esta arreglado

srte y salu2

My holidays were very funny because I did a lot of things I like doing, like cleaning up my cars. I had a race last year and they were very dirty, so I also fixed them, and my dad bought a new one for himself.

I played the guitar a lot, I learned three songs: "Black magic woman" by Santana, "Messsage in a bottle" by The Police, and the most difficult was one that I wrote on the computer. I went to tennis clases, two hours a week. I love tennis because I sleep better and I have more energy for the next day.

alguien que sepa ingles...?

corrijan esto por favor...

My vacation was very fun because I did a lot of things that I like to do. For example I cleaned up my race cars. I had a race last year so they were very dirty. I also fixed them, and my dad bought a new one for himself.

I played the guitar a lot. I learned 3 songs: "Black Magic Woman" by Santana, "Messsage in a Bottle" by the Police and the more difficult one that I wrote on the computer.

I was in tennis clases, two hours of training. I love tennis because I sleep better and I have more energy for the next day.

No es malo tu ingles pero te comento una cosa, en ingles cuando escribimos "I" usamos mayuscula. Pero con otros pronombres no hace falta poner mayuscula. El ingles ya sabes es un idioma caprichoso. Pero no te sientas desanimado no esta mal redactado no es tu idioma natal pero has aprendido mucho

Wow you play the guitar!! Que padre que marca tienes?

mis vacaciones fueron muy divertidas por que hice muchas cosas que me gustan hacer. por ejemplo, limpie mis carros rc, tuve una carrera el año pasado, asi que se ensuciaron mucho, tambien los repare y my papa se compro uno nuevo.

toque mucha guitarra y aprendi 3 nuevas canciones: black magic woman de santana, mensage en una botella por la policia y la mas dificil fue una que escribi en la computadora.

tuve clases de tennis, dos horas de entrenamiento. adoro el tennis por que duermo mejor y tengo mas energia para el dia siguiente.

esta mal escrito y mal redactado en varios casos. asi que le corregi algunas cosas a la traduccion.

demonios, traduje en vez de corregir, me di cuenta despues. espero que sirva de algo.

las correcciones del compa de arriba estan bien hechas, puedes tomarlas.

Yo sé Inglés pero esto es trabajo insalubre, porque no pones atención o escribes algo para lo que estés realmente capacitado?