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"There are no words to say how much I love you. You are(if you spell out are it make for more emphasis) the air that I breathe and (do you want to say that you walk on them? We have a phrase for that but it is negative. I think you just want to say that they are your foundation, to say that you step on someone, isn't good.... you could try: the foundation beneath me. When we're not together it is (almost) impossible to live. "

(You might want to add "almost" there)

>>>>>Sweet message :)

-- [There are no words to say how much I love you]

Perfect!

-- [You're the air that I breathe and the floor that I step]

Nearly there.

"I breathe the air" would be a correct sentence. However, "I step the floor" would be awkward. Fix it by adding a preposition, "I step ON the floor". So: "You're the air that I breathe and the floor that I step ON"

Maybe it might not sound as good. You can also try:

"You're the air that I breathe and the floor on which I step"

-- [When we're not together is impossible to live]

Should be:

"When we're not together, IT is impossible to live"

I would change it to read:

"There are no words to say how much I love you. You are the air that I breathe and the earth where I live. When we are not together it is impossible to live."

I replaced the contractions for poetic reasons, not grammatical. I also thought calling someone the floor you walk on was not complimentary. The only actual grammar I fixed was adding "it" in the last sentence.

"There are no words to say how much I love you. You're the air that I breathe and the floor upon which I walk. When we're not together, is impossible to live."

"There are no words to say how much I love you. You're the air that I breathe and the floor that I step upon. When we're not together, it is impossible to live."

Note: my use of "upon" is somewhat formal. Others might say "on," which is also correct. But you tone was somewhat formal so I used "upon."

"I'm out of words to vow my love for thee. Thou'rt the very air that I breathe, the floor I tread upon. When we're apart, life is unbearable."

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the only thing that u need to fix is the last sentence instead of "is" u should probably use "it's"

other then that it sounds pretty good i really like it