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BTW 15 isn't an excuse for vulgarity, or anything else but immaturity, but you did include it according to rules of conduct and I'm sure we all know the words. I wanted to relate to this as written, I was a teen once, and angst is part of life at any age, as is frustration and a sense of not being in control globally. What new planet do you suggest? Why not martyr yourself here trying to effect change.

I offer an analogy with regard to making an effort to change. It's not so difficult to do, even in the virtual sense. Consider it an exercise in math.

Take a penny, and for a full month, double the sum each day for 30 days, at the end of the 30 days, or 30 times doubling each new sum, what will you have? A lot of pennies. The relation to people is similar in speaking to one, they speak to 2, etc. etc. until a movement might begin, with a larger voice, causing change.

i think your poem captured a life of a teenager , no doubt your 15 . i would however suggest you try making your poem into something more acceptable . because poetry is not just read by people of our age , its read by everybody around the globe , and if you are trying to convey anything you might as well meet everybody's requirements . your poem expresses a frustrated behavior . i appreciate that because it is not fake . it is real . maybe that's why you have used up the vulgar words in your poem . its a good start . keep up the work :)