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1)You got the grammar correct

2) It should be "when DID you VISIT Beijing?" (past) or "When ARE you VISITING Beijing?" (future)

3)You can say that, or you can say "Do people in Osaka speak the language of Ainu" or "Do people in Osaka speak Ainu"

4) It should be "Isn't your language similar to their's?" or "Don't you speak a similar language to them?"

5)This is correct. Or do you mean "which cities are usually visited by Japanese tourists?"

6)This sentence makes no sense!! What do you mean by "but very little bit"????? The "I do have Arab friends here, they're in college." makes sense--if you are in England then say university if you mean they are getting a degree.

7)Makes sense, I guess....though you missed out a bit of punctuation "That's what's on my mind" but you have to say this after saying a point.

8)This makes little sense. I think it should be "it's the title of the song that I am listening to now; from Japan." or "it's the title of the song that I'm listening to now. It's from Japan."

9)Errr.....I think you mean "Just don't work too hard" or "just don't do work that is too hard."...if you mean that you don't want to the person to try to do work that would be too hard for them, you could use the saying "Just don't bite off more than you can chew."--it's so well known that people will understand.

Hope this helps!! For future help with your grammar:

-use an apostrophe ( ' ) when you are missing out a letter or if it is a possession, eg. It is= It's. and if the cake belongs to the girl, it is the girl's cake. And if the cake belongs to the two girls, it is the girls' cake!!

-Always put a capital letter on a proper noun (a person's name or a place name, a nationality, a race, a religion) like I, Japan, Japanese etc.

-You can be similar TO someone, but NOT similar WITH

-You can be in the same league AS someone, but NOT in the same league WITH someone. Don't forget that.....

-Past, Present and Future. The infinitive is To Visit. Past=Have visited, Present=am/are visiting, Future=Will visit

Your Grammar was, for the most part, very good and despite small mistakes could be understood!! You'll be fluent in no time!!!!!!!!!! ^-^!!!!

"singapore and malaysia are actually located in the same territory".

..Grammar OK, but not true. Territory is the land INSIDE a border/frontier. Singapore and Malaysia are on the same peninsula, but their territories are entirely separate.

"When you were visited Beijing?"

...When did you last visit Beijing?

"do people in osaka speak ainu language?" Ainu (names of languages begin with upper case)

"Isn't your language similar with them?"

...similar TO theirs (the language of the others)(to be similar TO something)

"which cities are usually visited by tourists in japan?"

...Which cities in Japan do tourists usually visit? (active voice is better than passive in this sentence)

"i do have arab friends here, they're in college. but very little bit"

....I have Arab friends here. They're in college. (I don't understand "..but very little bit")

"that's whats on my mind" OK!

"it's the title song i listening now, from Japan"

...It's the title OF the song I'm listening TO now, from Japan." (listen TO a song)

"Just dont take too hard of work"

...Just don't work too hard. (? I'm not sure what you mean to say...)

You can say

When where you visiting Bejing or when did you visit Bejing, both make sense

Isn't your language similair to there's?

I do have Arab friends here, they're in college. But not many.

it's the title of the song I'm listening to now, it's from Japan

Just don't work too hard

I can do some corrections to your sentences.

"When will you be visiting Beijing?

"I do have some Arabian friends here in college."

"The title of the song is in Japanese."

"Just don't work too hard."

Hope these help. A little more practice will make you more fluent and coherent in English :)

"Singapore and Malaysia are actually located in the same territory."

"When did you visit Beijing?"

Sorry I was to lazy to fix the other ones