X-Boy the main charcter and when his dad died he left gadgets in his will,and his sister who gains a mental issues and runs away is the main villain has she steals the most important gadget that controls time. Then thunder and blot are best friends help x-boy as they in same college and thunder has super strength and bolt super speed. Then the most powerful moon rise lived on another planet and was imported into space because he was too powerful for life. But X-Boy and the boys find him and train him and his powers are he has extreme speed I mean like faster than flash and extreme strength more than hulk can fly and has two amazing swords,last thing he can shoot comics rays and they all join to a alliance called the hawks,any advice how I could improve?
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xboy sounds pants please change the name,how about the father he is a scientest who works on new technolegys for a bad corporation ,he dies in what apears to be a accident in his lab when actually its the guy in charge killed him for a powerful pice of technology that the father belived was too powerful.Now the sister was at the lab hid but was discovered and as she knew that her fathers death was not a accident.The man in charge forces his other Scientists to turn her into more machine that humna to become a slave to do what evil he wants.twisting her into a monster.When he goes back to the fathers lab the pice of technology is no were to be found.
Back at the fathers home his son is messing around trying to get into his fathers at home lab becuase he wants one of his fathers harmless inventions a short range telporter only moves you a couple of feet,he breaks in starts rumaging for it.Finds a really strange machine hidden in his fathers lab its huge he walks in it to see what it does it turns on.He blacks out wakes up things nothing of it go back up then gos back upstairs then gradually learns over time this thing did somthing to him
if you want a space theme set in far futre aliens are part of every day society in his shcool some of his classmates are alien some are human
hope this gives you some ideas =p
watch xfiles star trek and star wars for ideas just search for watch tv online free streaming
and there is already a kids show called sky hawks,dont overload him with powers or it will amke stuff boring thats why superman has his cryptonite every superhero needs a weakness,that element of danger makes stuff fun,if the main character gets hurt it gives a thrill becuase people think will he be alright.So for example his has super powers but no super healing so for example he can throw stuff using the power of his mind bend metal with it throw cars but if somone hits him he can get hurt.
and your driving to close to the green lanturn story were people from different planets join together to fight,his classmates being aliens could be normal like human but some can read minds or protect images or teleport its normal for their each individual species.Make sure his abilities are greater than his friends but not too great so that it gets dosent get old.Make quests that last several comics thats a good one.