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I have a pet and his name is Tommy. He's very small because he's a pooble. Tommy is so cute, His coat is white and curly and his eyes look like two black buttons because they are so small. He has a bobtail.

He eats the whole day and never gets tired.

He always goes to my bedroom and

wakes me up in the morning. He licks my face and then he leaves. The other day he wanted to bite me because he didn't like it when I got close to him. He also gets angry when I get near his food or when I take his toy. He's still my favorite pet, although I do have two pets. My other dogs name is Colita and he is bigger than Tommy. He's more or less eight years old.

He was hit by a car four years ago but he's fine now except for the fact that he does not have feeling in his legs, because his hip was broken in the accident..

When Tommy barks loudly, he sometimes scares us ,then we must punish him.

I hope that he never dies, because if he dies, I die.

I love him so much.

A ver, te señalo donde te equivocaste y qué es lo correcto:

he's very small becouse He's a pooble -> Because, Poodle

He eats the whole day and never is tired -> Es incorrecto decir "never is tired", lo correcto es "Never gets tired"

He wanted to bite me becouse-> de nuevo, va because.

He also get angry -> gets angry

although He not feel his legs, becouse He has broken hip-> He doesnt feel his legs, y He has broken hips

Tommy start to bark-> starts

I have a pet (named or called tommy), o puedes decir I have a pet its name is... (his name es para hablar de una persona del sexo masculino)...

my dog tommy, (en lugar de tommy my dog)...

it´s ...en lugar de he´s..

because...

...and it´s never tired...

...gets angry...

...I´ve two pets...

...favorite...

... it doesn´t feel its legs, because he broke its hip...

debes checar otras frases., pero espero que lo que escribí te sea útil =)

Es: He have white and curly hair