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1. The story was including in all of its aspects of Raymond. In His steps the novel for strengths in technique was his writing style
2. In Raymond there were most Christian were living there, and we can saw people they going to church every Sunday morning. They worship into the congregation.
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I'm afraid I can't quite make sense of what you're trying to say. However, here's my best guess:
1) The story included all aspects of Raymond. The style of the novel, In His Steps, showed strength in technique.
(I'm assuming "In His Steps" is the title of the book...?)
2. In Raymond, most residents were Christian, and we saw that they went to church every Sunday morning. They worshiped in the congregation.
1. Every aspect of the story was about Raymond. In the novel; his greatest strengths were his writing style.
2. There were mostly Christians living in Raymond, and we could see them going to church every morning, so that they could worship in congregation.
I that what you were asking for? I didn't quite understand the sentences.
I don't understand what your asking for. For us to re-write the sentence or which one sounds better? Because the first one obviously sounds better but like I said I don't know what you're asking?......