This is the url to a web page that has the prompt on it-http://home.wi.rr.com/richterap/AP%20Language/Lang... If anyone has any ideas as to what this means or what the prompt is asking me to do or anything, please reply. I need your help!!! A sample thesis statement would be most pleasing!!!. Created by Anonymous. education-reference-en - homework-help-en

The prompt is asking you to examine the first and second drafts of the paragraph. Once you've done that, you are to explain why the author changed certain things in the later draft, why s/he added or deleted sentences, changed syntax etc. Write an essay examining and explaining these changes and the decision on the author's part to do so.