A poem on goodbyes--c/c?
For my friends Dallas and LC.
I enter by your eyes
tall column of pulsebeats
the night shakes loose from the day
you have always just arrived
you walk through the cliffs of your dreams
you sleep in my blood
the world closes like a ring
we will never be finished, never
even when the final thread is woven
and the night falls forever
the body an incandescent instant
limitless, in a tiny room
over the flashing forests
the sun rises alone
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I got Chill bumps, PINGS and thank you. I hope LC will see this also.
This is great writing.
The night shakes loose from the day
you sleep in my blood
the world closes like a ring
even when the final thread is woven
and the night falls forever
the body an incandescent instant
limitless, in a tiny room
over the flashing forests
The message is strong. The tribute moving. You have a very visual style. It's good to read it.
Best,
Todd