can someone correct my paragraph plz?!?

In Korea, the men have to serve at least two years in the army and its a law so people can not say no unless they want to go to jail. Therefore, I went to the army when I was twenty two. Oneday after complete hard training ,the commander informed that we could have time to do our individual works. I was planned to write letters to acquaintances. However, one of our sergeant gathered people to play soccer. I did not want to play because I do not want to waste my own time that the commander informed. In the army,even if a person was younger than I am , sometimes I have to be obdient to the person because he was higher position than I was. I do not have choice not to paly soccer. I hate to do that, but an order is an order.

thank you .. im not good at english but I tried !!

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