hola necesito su ayuda sobre un ejercicio de ingles?
bueno se supone que es past perfect no se si este bien y si me pueden coregir estaria bien
gracias de ante mano
My brother went to Paris last month he said that had flown from London to Paris. And he had taken a shower very early and he had dressed a black suit. Later he had left home and had driven to the airport. Before he left he had parked the car and then he had eaten at the airport Café where he had drunk an orange juice before he checked his luggage. Then he had gone through passport control and he said that had waited for the flight. The plane had departed on a time and he arrived to Paris in the afternoon. There he had taken a taxi from the airport to his hostel in the center of Paris.
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Nooooooo, no hay que poner todos los verbos en past perfect!!!!
Past Perfect tiene un uso específico en los relatos.
Sirve para hablar de diferentes momentos pasados.
Cuando yo relato algo, uso el pasado, pero hay cosas que ocurrieron antes que otras, y en inglés se marca esa diferencia usando past perfect.
When I arrived home, he had made the dinner.
Qué ocurrió primero? I arrived home? O he made the dinner?
Primero he made the dinner. Después, I arrived home.
Entonces una cosa ocurrió antes que la otra. Por eso marco la diferencia.
Cuando yo llegué a casa, él ya había preparado la cena.
Tu relato tiene mucho past perfect pero no está bien usado. Correspondería usar el pasado simple en la mayoría de las oraciones. Hay que pensar que el past perfect se traduce como ‘había hecho tal cosa’.
Tu texto también necesita otros cambios:
He had dressed a black suit: he put on a black suit
An orange juice: orange juice.
Departed on a time: departed on time.
Arrived to Paris: arrived in Paris
My brother went to Paris last month. He said that he had flown from London to Paris. That day, he took a shower very early and he put on a black suit. Later, he left home and drove to the airport. Before he had left, he parked the car and then, he ate at the airport café where he drunk orange juice before checking his luggage. Then, he went through passport control and waited for the flight. The plane departed on time and he arrived in Paris in the afternoon. There, he took a taxi from the airport to his hostel in the centre of Paris.
Se usa past simple porque se están enumerando acciones consecutivas, y no corresponde past perfect.
El texto que te propone María Aurora está muy bien, sólo que le cambió las oraciones. :)
Perfecto!
Necesito su ayuda. Yo necesito el numero de telefono de mi amigo Bolivar Bolanos en Quito, Ecuador. No puedo encontrarlo aqui. Favor de ayudarme. Es muy importante.
My brother went to Paris last month but he had been there many times before, so it was not new for him. He told me that he had gotten up very early every time he had been there, but that this last time he had chosen to sleep late. It was just work, as usual, but he visited all the shopping malls that he had liked in his previous trips to buy us all the nice perfumes that we asked him to buy for us.
LE CAMBIÃ UN POQUITO ESPERANDO QUE TE SIRVA PARA ADAPTAR EL TUYO. EN FIN, ES QUE YA TENGO SUEÃITO Y ME QUIERO DORMIR. Besitos, suerte,