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This is the story of mine:

When I loved you

I didn't understand why did you leave me,

but I still remember you.

Now I'm walking

on a street of dreams

and I'm thinking,

why did you love me?

because

I've looked in my life yet,

and I've seen a real love.

Do you remember when you asked me?

with your happy eyes,

you kissed me

and then you went off with my heart.

You say me

what does it mean for you,

my love, my heart, my dreams

And I think why I still loving you.

Tell me, why did you leave me

and you never call me?

Where are the romantic messages

with a rose for me?.

Ok, what can I say?

You're stupid

because you play with hearts.

Who is so stupid to play

with innocent girls' life?

A ver si te sirve! Hay cosas que se pueden poner de varias formas, pero lo he puesto de la forma que mejor me parece.

Feliz Navidad!

OK voy a tratar de mejorarlo

This is a story of me (myself)

When i loved you

I don`t now why did you go VERBO

but i still remember you

Now i`m walking

in the streets of my dreams PLURAL

and i think

why you loved my NO WHAT

because

i still looking for you in my life BUSCANDO?

and i look for a really love MMMMM

do you member when asked to my? (QUe te pregunto al finaL?

with your happy eyes ORDEN

you kissed my

and after you went with my heart MMM???

you said....

what:does it mean

my love,my heart,my dreams"

And i think why i still love you. WHY NO WHAT

Tell my,why do you leave me? NO GO

and never you call me back

where are those romantics messages ? NO MESSENGER

wiht a rose for me. NO MY

Ok,what can I say?

You`re so stupid

because play with everybody´s hearts.

Why are so stupid for playing

with an innocent girl life? ORDEN

BUENO M;EDIO RAPIDO PERO ALGO MEJOR

SALU"

Linda entendi perfectamente lo que quieres decir y aqui esta la traduccion correcta al ingles. If you need any additional help please let me know. Aqui te la escribo corregida:

This is a story of mine…,

I loved you and still wondered

why did you leave me?

Even though, I still remember you.

Now I’m walking down

a street made out of dreams

while thinking…

Why did you love me?

And looking at my life

I thought your love for me was real.

Do you remember that day

when you asked me,

with a glimmer in your eyes?

you kissed me,

and left with my heart.

you said to me

that all these belong to me:

your love, your heart, your dreams"

And I think that still I loved you.

Tell me, why did you go,

and why do you never give me a call?

where are the romantic deliveries?

carrying a bucket of roses for me.

Now I can say

You’re a stupid

because all you’ve done is play with the hearts.

Why are you so stupid?

Why did you play

with the life of an innocent girl?

yo tengo el first certificated asi que mejor respuesta qe la mia no hay

votaame

This is a story about me

When i loved you

I don`t know why you left me ( or went pero es mejor left me)

but I remember still you

Now i`m walking

in the street of dreams

and I think

why you loved me

because

I still looking in my life the reason (no se puede poner yet porqe esta gramaticalmente mal y tenes qe aclarar lo qe buscas)

and I looking for reall love

do you member when you asked me?

with your happy eyes ( los ojos no son felices)

you kissed me

and then you went away with my heart

you told me

that this were for me, for my love, for my hart, and for my dreams (reported speech)

And i think why I still in love with you.

Tell my,why you had go?

and never you call me

where are the romantics messenger?

with a rose for me.

Ok,what i can say?

You`re stupid

because you had played with hearts.

Who are so stupid for play

with life of innosent girl?

lo qe esta en parentesis son aclaracion para qe se entienda por qe lo hice

NO pongas YET,, por qe yet significa ya (( ej. "ya son las 7.30 de la tarde.. como pasa el tiempo"

y vos queres poner TODAVIA qe es still

This is my story (esta es mi historia)

When I loved you (cuando te ame)

I don't know why you left (no se porque te fuiste)

But I still remember you (pero todavia me acuerdo de ti)

Now I'm walking (ahora camino)

In a street of dreams (en una calle de suenos)

And I think ( y pienso) o And I ask myself (y me pregunto)

If you loved me (si me amastes)

because (porque)

Reminiscing(recordandome)

I see a true love ( veo un amor real)

Do you remember when you asked me?( recuerdas cuando me preguntates)

With your happy eyes (con tus hojos felices)

you kissed me (me besastes)

and you left with my heart( y te fuiste con mi corazon)

You told me (me dijiste)

This is for you(esto es para ti)

My love, my heart, my dreams( mi amor, mi corazon, mis suenos)

And I think I still love you( y creo que aun te amo)

Tell me why you left? ( Dime porque te fuiste)

and never called ( y nunca llamaste)

Where are the romantic messages( Adonde estan los mensajes romanticos)

With a rose for me (con una rosa para mi)

Well, what can I say?( bueno, que puedo decir?)

You're stupid o You're an idiot ( Eres un estupido o eres un idiota)

for playing with my heart ( por jugar con mi corazon)

Why were you so stupid to play with the heart of an innocent girl? ( Porque fuiste tan estupido al jugar con el corazon de una nina/joven inocente)

Lo tradusi como crei que fue tu intension. Espero que te ayude. Mejor as de poner la letra original en ingles para hacerlo mejor. Saludos de Chicago.

This is a story of me

When I love you

I don’t know why you go

but I still remember you

Now I’m walking

in the streets of dreams

and I think

that you love me

for what I was looking in my life

and I look a real love

Do you remember when you ask me?

with your happy eyes

you kiss me

and after that you went with my heart

You told me

that this is for you

my love, my heart, my dreams

and I think that I still love you

Tell me, why you go?

and you never call me

where are the romantic messages

with a rose for me?

Ok, what can I say?

you’re stupid

Because you play with my heart

Who is so stupid to play

with the life of an innocent girl?

Hola, espero que te sirva hice lo mas que pude y porfas hazme saber si lo hice correctamente, tu sabes para echarle mas ganas a la proxima, ok... saludos bye....

This is my story.

now that I love you

I don't know why you leave

but still, I will remember you.

now I'm walking in the street of dreams

and I think

why, did you loved me.

I see my life and ask, was this

real love.

do you remember

when you asked me out

and with that look in your eyes

you kissed me

and after that, you left and took my

heart. Tell me what this meant for you.

you took my love, my heart, my dreams,

and I ask my self, do I still love you?

tell me, why you left?

Why you never called.

where are the romantic

messages with a rose for me.

o.k . the only thing I can say is that your stupid,

because you played with my heart

Who? is so stupid to play with a heart and life of

an innocent girl.....

lee todas las respuestas y fíjate q hay unos q te dan muy buena presentación y no la ortografía correcta.

This is a story of mine

When i loved you

I don`t now why did you go

but yet i remember you

Now i`m walking

in the street of dreams

and i think

that you loved me

because

yet i looking in my life

and i look a real love

do you remember when asked my?

with your happy eyes

you kissed me

and after you leave with my heart

you said me

this is for you

my love,my heart,my dremas"

And i think, yet i love you.

Tell my,why did you go?

and never called me

where are the messenger romantics?

wiht a rose for me.

Ok,what can i say?

You`re stupid

because play with hearts.

Who are so stupid for play

with life of an innosent girl?

hola, no soy un experto en ingles pero se bastante

esto es lo que me parece q esta mal, pero verificalo con la opinion de otros por precaucion

This is MY story

When i WAS IN LOVE WHIT YOU

I don`t now why you go

but yet i REMEMBER you

Now i`m walking

in the street of dreams

and i think

what you loved mE(ESTO QUEDA MAL)

because

yet i'AM looking in my life

and i look a REAL love

do you REmember when asked mE?

with your HAPPY eyes

you kissed mE

and THEN you went with my BROKEN heart

you said mE

what:this is for you (no entiendo esta parte)

my love,my heart,my dreAms"

And i think what(why?) yet i love you.

Tell mE, why you go?

and never you call me

where are the messenger romantics?(?)

with a rose for mE.

Ok,what i can say?

You`re stupid

because play with hearts.

Who are so stupid TO play

with life of A innosent girl?

si lo q dije esta mal disculpalme, pero a mi opinion seria asi

This is a story of me

When i loved you

I don`t know why did you go

but i still remember you

Now i`m walking

in the street of dreams

and i think

that you loved me

because

i keep looking in my life

and i see a real love

do you remember when you asked me?

with your happy eyes

you kissed me

and later you left with my heart

you told me

:this is for you

my love,my heart,my dreams"

And i think that i still love you.

Tell me,why did you go?

and you never call me

where are the romantic messages?

with a rose for me.

Ok,what i can say?

You`re stupid

because you play with hearts.

Who are so stupid for play

with life of an innocent girl?

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