(i'm a filipino, just testing my skills in doing some english poems..)

"A Serpent's Labyrinth"

Wandering through the ruins of the past

Hope is gone, nothing left even a dust

Tears fell as I gazed upon the grey skies

Had enough to roll another dice

Never thought this will hurt me so much

Should I suffer for giving all my trust?

So you betrayed me, as you always did

Then feed me more apathy, and watch me bleed

The words we'd shared in front of the lords

Just lingered at the walls of dark corridors

I've searched for a bag of love and conscience

But I got enslaved behind your cold fences

Playing blind to those shits you put me through

Scenes of vituperation, for me, are not new

I've let my neck be strangled and learned how to take

Yet in the end, you're the one who turned to snake

So, unwrap me from your cruel fingers

Who anguish souls for its own desires

Release me from this mist-filled labyrinth

So that I will learn again how to breathe

Worse than a traitor who slew it's own brethren

This foolishness shall meet its fateful end

Now, as these tears keep drowning me in despair

Tormented, blindfolded, I seek the open air

(can you please tell me if this poem is boring to read or whatever, your favorite line..anything..tnx)