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FIRST LOVE - LAST LOVE

Waves of emotion spill onto the shores of my heart

Looking back at times of peace, where joy was the essence of our love

Then captured by the beauty of the fiery flame

That was to divide - our united name,

Daemons lurking in the shadows of our weakness

Playing games of juvenile proportion

Blinded by the spitting of the snake!

Our love now - to forsake,

Crashing into walls of fear and shedding countless tears

And diving into pools of pain, swimming in the whirl of games

Then washed up on this barren land

Our names once written in the sand,

And darkness fell - upon our shining light

Covered joy - with a ghastly sight

Three - now in this game for two

Was it me? Was it you?

Innocence forever lost - the beginning and the end

A string of human lovers - like angels – transcend

Broken - all the pieces fall - upon a filthy world

But in your eyes, I still see – just a little girl.

WRITTEN BY:

A.T - SILVERCHICK

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